posted by Gawaskar at 8:53 PM
impressive ...keep it up
Very nice ad. Good concept. However, copy needs to more punchy.
really it is verry different
copy could read-1) Let's keep it clean this diwali!2)(from top left)"Whipe out every trace of..." (visual) "this Diwali" (bottom right)
you need more copy
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impressive ...
keep it up
Very nice ad. Good concept. However, copy needs to more punchy.
really it is verry different
copy could read-
1) Let's keep it clean this diwali!
2)(from top left)
"Whipe out every trace of..." (visual)
"this Diwali" (bottom right)
you need more copy
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